poetry || their embrace.

Posted on August 22, 2016

Until

She blanketed herself

In her own embrace

Borrowed warmth never rose

Only one direction

Downward

Spiraling

But her

But her

Own heat rises

Circumventing

Warming

Illuminating

The lowest temperatures

Her heart

Was at it lowest

Temperature

Until

She blanketed herself

In her own embrace

Effects of authentic heat

No more counterfeit.

-Nosy Josie

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5 Comments on poetry || their embrace.

Original-Dante // August 22, 2016 at 3:51 pm // Reply

Mmmmmmmmmm…you gave her character, I like that…well done Jo…write more poetry lol! :)

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- nosyjosie // August 22, 2016 at 4:08 pm // Reply
  
  lol :D thank you! Isn’t it fun to read another dimension of your characters? Especially when you’ll have no control over who they might become in someone else’s mind! Just think of all of the perspectives traveled in the mind of all of your readers!!
  
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  - Original-Dante // August 22, 2016 at 4:11 pm // Reply
    
    This idea is pure gold Jo…there a some poems I write that make me wonder how they’d go if the story continued…I guess you found the solution :P
    
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    - nosyjosie // August 22, 2016 at 4:22 pm //
      
      haha! Doing so would drive you crazy after a while, I’m sure. I’ll only pry ever so often to let you know I’m paying attention.
      
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  - Original-Dante // August 22, 2016 at 4:12 pm // Reply
    
    And you’re right, its fun…especially since I don’t know where it’ll be going :)
    
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